Oh well done! I hardly think you need me, Winn, if you can pull together a verse like that! The last line runs a little uneven, but I think we can forgive that, as I cannot see a way around it, yet.
[ behind him, the dictating pen hermione gave him has been hard at work writing down the lyrics. so he turns to grab that sheet of paper now and nods. ]
I knew a girl, a clever girl, From a town of cold and rain Oh she smiled at me, and she laughed at me, But our hearts they were the same.
Her eyes were bright, her tongue was sharp Her mind of quicksilver made Oh she smiled at me, and she argued with me And we love the same video games
I knew a girl, a studious girl This gift she'll probably hate The lyrics are too easily analyzed And the score written past 1798.
I knew a girl, a brilliant girl, And as luck has it I know her still As I string words together she surely will scoff But it won't change how I feel
She likes to read and she likes to learn, She likes to teach me too! Oh her smiles are bright, And her eyes are sharp But her mind is sharper still!
If you happen upon her remember these words Though her appearance misleading may be There is no kinder soul than this little nerd Please forgive me for now I must flee!
[ there is a definite proud little blush there, he hasn't done any creative writing in the fleet and he definitely never tried writing lyrics before and he's just so glad he managed to come up with anything at all. ]
Thanks Maglor - seriously, couldn't do it without you. Now we just, gotta record it so I could send it to her.
[ he might be imagining things, he's still a little out of it from his coma, all them new memories. or maybe he triggered something, he doesn't know maglor well enough to ask, though, does he. ]
[ As Winn hits record, Maglor bows to the camera with a wink and strikes the opening chord, stepping back to give Winn center stage, his harp dancing under his hands ]
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That is amazing - you're a genius. Okay - let me try - [ he clears his throat and thinks for a moment before singing to the same tune. ]
I knew a girl, a studious girl
This gift she'll probably hate
The lyrics are too easy to analyze
And the score was written after 1798.
How's that?
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Oh well done! I hardly think you need me, Winn, if you can pull together a verse like that! The last line runs a little uneven, but I think we can forgive that, as I cannot see a way around it, yet.
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[ so much grinning at the compliment though. ]
I definitely need you, though, that tune is inspiring.
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Okay um - how's this? [ he clears his throat and sings ]
I knew a girl, a brilliant girl,
And as luck has it I know her still
As I string words together she surely will scoff
But it won't change how I feel
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Oh well done! An excellent verse.
She likes to read and she likes to learn,
She likes to teach me too!
Oh her smiles are bright,
And her eyes are sharp
But her mind is sharper still!
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Though her appearance misleading may be
There is no kinder soul than this little nerd
[ he pauses, trying to figure out how to rhyme this ]
Please forgive me, I must now flee?
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An excellent ending, and one that will prove propehtic, I fear, although you will not long be able to evade her on these ships!
Although I think you might want to try Please forgive me for now I must flee and see if it scans better
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It's okay, I'm not really gonna try.
[ nodding. ]
Should we try to sing the whole thing, see what it sounds like?
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[ He laughs softly and strikes the opening chords of the song for him ]
Just say the word.
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I knew a girl, a clever girl,
From a town of cold and rain
Oh she smiled at me, and she laughed at me,
But our hearts they were the same.
Her eyes were bright, her tongue was sharp
Her mind of quicksilver made
Oh she smiled at me, and she argued with me
And we love the same video games
I knew a girl, a studious girl
This gift she'll probably hate
The lyrics are too easily analyzed
And the score written past 1798.
I knew a girl, a brilliant girl,
And as luck has it I know her still
As I string words together she surely will scoff
But it won't change how I feel
She likes to read and she likes to learn,
She likes to teach me too!
Oh her smiles are bright,
And her eyes are sharp
But her mind is sharper still!
If you happen upon her remember these words
Though her appearance misleading may be
There is no kinder soul than this little nerd
Please forgive me for now I must flee!
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Well done, well done! I think you have done an excellent job, Winn.
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Thanks Maglor - seriously, couldn't do it without you. Now we just, gotta record it so I could send it to her.
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[ he does that ]
And we hit record, sing it, then I upload the file and send it to her. Easy peasy fresh and squeazy.
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Ah now, what sort of friend would I be to leave you to face the storm alone?
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You -- are a good man. Ready?
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When you are, Winn. On three?
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On three -
[ he counts down and hits record ]
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Oh I know a girl~
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That sounded pretty good, didn't it?
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